Hal and Cathrine's relationship:
Hal wants to form a relationship with Cathrine, but she pushes him away at the beginning because shes' too into her work and she sort of thinks little of him because he just reads her dad's work instead of actually doing the work, and to her that's not much of a mathematician. She warms up to Hal in the middle of the movie spending time with him, telling him about how her dad taught her most of what she knows. Then he deceive her in the part of the movie when her sister says Cathrine doesn't write the proof, Cathrine goes to Hal to prove that she did, to look at the writing but he doesn't defend her. At that time in the movie, I felt like she really gave up on liking him because that was her life's goal it seemed to write the proof and he basically took her dreams and stepped all over it. That to me seems a little fishy, but at the end he took effort to show her it is her writing because the formulas she used were new formulas that her father couldnt have known how to do. In my opinion he was always intrested in her but things got cloudy.
Right, well, what's a movie relationship without a little conflict? I like your breakdown of what their relationship was like and why it was like it was.
ReplyDeleteThis post was easier to read than the Dark Knight post, but there are still a few things to clean up. Try to break up the thoughts in your sentences a little bit more.
Hal wants to form a relationship with Cathrine, but she pushes him away at the beginning because shes' too into her work and she sort of thinks little of him because he just reads her dad's work instead of actually doing the work, and to her that's not much of a mathematician.
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Hal wants to form a relationship with Catherine, but she pushes him away at the beginning because she's too into her work. She also sort of thinks little of him because he just reads her dad's work instead of actually doing the work, and to her that's not much of a mathematician.